Luseylottay's New App

Well, no longer a mod, i want to now be a writer so...

Name: Aurelia
Age: 13
Email: pixiepower95@hotmail.com
References: I was a mod here before and uh, i used to live inside Neopets and Misticpets
Examples:
Baby Falkor: "Very demanding and loud... Thats what you get for hatching a Falkor"
Watermelon: "Juicy sweet and very refreshing... Whats not to love?"
Cake: "Covered in delectable frosting, this treat is sure to cheer up your unhappy pet"

Please take a look at the previous applications. You need 3 item descriptions and 1 pet description. You also need to make your current pet description longer and I see some grammar errors in your application such as "i" when it should be capitalized.

Quote :

Baby Falkor: "Very demanding and loud... Thats what you get for hatching a Falkor"

There should be an apostrophe in 'Thats,' because you were trying to say 'That is' = That's.

Quote :

Watermelon: "Juicy sweet and very refreshing... Whats not to love?"

There should be a comma in between juicy and sweet. 'Whats' also needs an apostrophe = What's.

alright alright I'm sorry >___< Ill redo the app

Name: Aurelia
Age: 13
Email: pixiepower95@hotmail.com
References: Used to live on Misticpets and Neopets.. I still do
Examples:
Baby Falkor: "A Baby Falkor is the toughest to raise, though cute and cuddly looking, they will tear your furniture apart. They are always screeching for you to feed them and many poeple end up with scratches on their arms and legs. If you try to raise a Falkor, then I suggest you wear protective armour."
Watermelon: "Juicy, sweet and very refreshing... What's not to love?"
Cake: "Covered in delectable frosting, this treat is sure to cheer up your unhappy pet"
Red Bean Bag Chair: "The squishy comfort of the Bean Bag alongside it's bright red color makes a comfortable and stylish way to relax"

We currently do not have enough work for another writer, therefore we cannot hire you at this time. However, if we are in need of more writers we will call you back so that you may reapply?

Thank you for your application.